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Season 3, Episode 30: Commuting

10/30/2026
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This is Drabbletober, the podcast of tiny fiction.


Hello, and welcome to Drabbletober. This is episode 30, season 3, for Friday

the thirtieth of October 2026, and I'm Elizabeth Guilt.


Your one-hundred word story for the day is: Commuting


by Elizabeth Guilt


The woman on the platform is arguing with someone who isn't there.

"You forgot. Again."

She's not wearing earbuds. She's young, smartly-dressed. Pretty. She jabs a manicured finger in the air.

"I am never - never - a priority."

The steady stream of commuters pours past. No-one looks at her, shouting by herself.

I get off the train, and sit on the bench beside her.

"No," she says. "No. It's not good enough. You're always late."

Her eyes bore into mine.

And I remember. I remember every single time I've let her down.

A tear rolls down my face.

"I'm so sorry."


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Take care, everyone, and I'll see you tomorrow for episode 31.

http://www.elizabethguilt.com/drabbletober/s3episode30

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