
#409 - LinkedIn DM Autopsy: Watch us Fix These Common Mistakes
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About this episode (#410):
Jeremy and Jack are back in the studio breaking down a pair of cold outreach messages, including one that went viral on LinkedIn. They explore what worked, what didn't, and how small tweaks in tone and structure can make a big difference in response rates. The episode dives into writing conversational, curiosity-driven messages that actually open doors on LinkedIn.
Key Topics:
- Why starting a cold message with a question can be risky but sometimes effective
- The problem with jargon and why clarity always wins
- How to use the CCQ framework (Compliment, Commonality, Question) to personalize outreach
- Rewriting a LinkedIn message to sound more natural and human
- How to balance curiosity with clarity in a short LinkedIn connection note
- The difference between opening a conversation and selling right away
- How strategy and product positioning tie directly into outreach campaigns
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This teardown shows how small writing decisions shape your outreach success. Whether you're writing LinkedIn DMs or cold emails, the goal isn't to pitch, it's to connect.
About the hosts:Â
Jack Reamer founded SalesBread.com – the lead generation agency that brings B2B companies 1 lead per day by sending ultra-personalized LinkedIn messages and cold emails. Show listeners can book a free, 15-minute lead generation brainstorm session here: https://salesbread.com/contact/
Jeremy Chatelaine founded QuickMail.com – the most performant cold email platform to get replies, thanks to industry-leading features such as Deliverability AI and Advanced Stats. Start your trial today here: https://quickmail.com
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