294. Mid-Draft Slump? How to Move Your Story Forward

You know everything about your character’s past. That’s exactly as it should be. But knowing it and putting it all on the page are two different things, and the difference decides whether your reader keeps reading. In this episode, you’ll discover three ways to bring your character’s past onto the page so it pulls your reader forward instead of holding them back.SUBSCRIBE & REVIEWIf this episode helped, subscribe wherever you listen and leave a review on Apple Podcasts. Every review helps another writer finish their story. Thanks for tuning in to Writer Unleashed!

You know everything about your character. Her history. Her wounds. What she ate for breakfast the morning her life fell apart. So why doesn’t your reader love her the way you do? The answer isn’t in your character’s backstory. In this episode, you’ll learn three moves that turn the character you know so well into one your reader believes, worries about, and follows all the way to the last page.RESOURCES MENTIONED IN THS EPISODEEducated by Tara WestoverRemains of the Day of Kazuo IshiguroPride and Prejudice by Jane AustinSUBSCRIBE & REVIEWIf this episode helped, subscribe wherever you listen and leave a review on Apple Podcasts. Every review helps another writer finish their story. Thanks for tuning in to Writer Unleashed!

Your dialogue sounds natural. It’s exactly what these two people would say to each other. So why does the scene still feel flat? Making your characters argue won’t necessarily help. Neither will giving them clever things to say. What gives an exchange its pull runs deeper than the words on the page. Today, I’ll show you what gives dialogue its tension, and how to make even a quiet conversation feel like something readers can’t afford to miss.IN THIS EPISODEThe shift that turns every line of dialogue into something your character doesWhat every character needs to bring into a conversation, even a quiet oneHow a single word choice can reveal the way a character sees the worldA simple exercise to try on any scene that feels offRESOURCES MENTIONED IN THIS EPISODEThe Glass Castle by Jeannette Walls Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen Roger Alan SkipperSUBSCRIBE & REVIEWIf this episode helped, subscribe wherever you listen and leave a review on Apple Podcasts. Every review helps another writer finish their story. Thanks for tuning in to Writer Unleashed!SUBSCRIBE & REVIEWIf this episode helped, subscribe wherever you listen and leave a review on Apple Podcasts. Every review helps another writer finish their story. Thanks for tuning in to Writer Unleashed!

You've written chapters, studied craft, maybe tried an outline or three. So why is it still so hard to decide where your story begins, which scenes belong, or what needs to happen in the middle?Often the trouble isn't effort. It's what you've been taught to believe about writing a book. In this episode, I clear up three misconceptions that make finishing harder: that you have to have it all figured out before you write, that a story needs big events to keep readers hooked, and that struggling with your story means you're not cut out for this. Plus, one simple question to bring back to your work-in-progress this week.Links mentioned in this episode: Final FREE Masterclass: From Stuck to Story: 3 Simple Shifts to Find the Structure in Your Pages. Wednesday, October 21 at 7 pm Eastern. Grab Your Seat3-Act StorySUBSCRIBE & REVIEWIf this episode helped, subscribe wherever you listen and leave a review on Apple Podcasts. Every review helps another writer finish their story. Thanks for tuning in to Writer Unleashed!

When your story feels stuck, it's tempting to keep adding things: another scene, more backstory, a new subplot. But often the answer isn't to add more. It's to reconnect with why you're writing this story in the first place. In this episode, you'll get three questions that lead you back to that reason, and you'll see why it's what keeps you writing from first draft to finished book. Whether you're working from notes, a partial draft, or your fifth revision, what you need to get moving again is already in your pages.Links mentioned in this episode: Final Free Masterclass: From Stuck to Story Wednesday, October 21, 7 pm ET. Register Here.SUBSCRIBE & REVIEWIf this episode helped, subscribe wherever you listen and leave a review on Apple Podcasts. Every review helps another writer finish their story. Thanks for tuning in to Writer Unleashed!

Most writers can describe their plot in detail: what happens, in what order, how it ends. Far fewer can describe what their character actually gains, loses, or finally understands by the time the story's over.In this episode, I walk through how plot and character work together: what to ask about a plot event before you decide it belongs, how to tell if your character has changed, and how to find your next plot step by following your character's response, instead of inventing one out of thin air.RESOURCE MENTIONED IN THIS EPISODEEleanor Oliphant Is Completely Fine by Gail HoneymanSUBSCRIBE & REVIEWIf you enjoyed this episode, please take a moment to subscribe and leave a review on Apple Podcasts. Your support helps more writers find the show, strengthen their craft, and finish the stories they want to tell.Thanks for tuning in to Writer Unleashed. See you next week!SUBSCRIBE & REVIEWIf this episode helped, subscribe wherever you listen and leave a review on Apple Podcasts. Every review helps another writer finish their story. Thanks for tuning in to Writer Unleashed!

You've revised your first chapter so many times you could recite it, and it still isn't pulling a reader in. After years of reading first chapters, here's what I've learned: when one works, it's rarely because of the prose. It's because of what's happening underneath it. Today, I walk you through the three things a reader needs from your first chapter, and how to tell whether yours delivers.IN THIS EPISODEWhy your first chapter doesn't have to be perfect before you write the rest of your storyThe difference between exposition that stalls a chapter and exposition that reveals characterThe question to ask before any piece of backstory goes into your openingWhy the strongest first chapters are built around one event, and how to find yoursThe difference between your character's big story goal and what they want right nowThree questions to ask when your first chapter still isn't working after another round of revisionRESOURCE MENTIONED IN THIS EPISODESomeday This Pain Will Be Useful to You by Peter Cameron SUBSCRIBE & REVIEWIf you enjoyed this episode, please take a moment to subscribe and leave a review on Apple Podcasts. Your support helps more writers find the show, strengthen their craft, and finish the stories they want to tell.Thanks for tuning in to Writer Unleashed. See you next week!SUBSCRIBE & REVIEWIf this episode helped, subscribe wherever you listen and leave a review on Apple Podcasts. Every review helps another writer finish their story. Thanks for tuning in to Writer Unleashed!

You've written the scenes. Your characters are doing things. So why does the middle of your story still feel like quicksand? If your first instinct is to add more, hold that thought. In this episode, I share what actually creates momentum in the middle of a draft, and why the answer may already be on your pages.You’ll learn the questions to ask when your middle starts to feel too big, too slow, or too difficult to navigate, so you can find the through line that’s already there.SUBSCRIBE & REVIEWIf you enjoyed this episode, please take a moment to subscribe and leave a review on Apple Podcasts. Your support helps more writers find the show, strengthen their craft, and finish the stories they want to tell.Thanks for tuning in to Writer Unleashed. See you next week!SUBSCRIBE & REVIEWIf this episode helped, subscribe wherever you listen and leave a review on Apple Podcasts. Every review helps another writer finish their story. Thanks for tuning in to Writer Unleashed!

You’ve read the craft books, tried the frameworks, written hundreds of pages, and you still can’t quite see what your story needs.In this episode, I’m talking about what changes when your story finally starts to come into focus, when you can tell what belongs, recognize why something isn’t working, and make decisions without knowing every scene in advance.Because clarity doesn’t mean you’ll never get stuck. It means you know how to find your way forward.SUBSCRIBE & REVIEWIf this episode helped, subscribe wherever you listen and leave a review on Apple Podcasts. Every review helps another writer finish their story. Thanks for tuning in to Writer Unleashed!

You can Google anything about writing. Ask AI. Read every craft book on the shelf. And still sit down to your own pages and feel exactly as stuck as before.It's not a lack of talent. Or motivation. It's the gap between having a story you're desperate to write and knowing how to write it.This episode is about why that gap is so easy to miss, why the excitement of a new project always seems to run out at the same point, and why more information isn't necessarily what you need to get unstuck.SUBSCRIBE & REVIEWIf this episode helped, subscribe wherever you listen and leave a review on Apple Podcasts. Every review helps another writer finish their story. Thanks for tuning in to Writer Unleashed!